This is excellent. I'd like to use it as an example for future classes if that's alright with you.
Application Paper 3
I've never been very confident with my writing, and close to the beginning of this semester I was humbled in how much I didn't know, so I've grown with each comment and constructive criticism. I was so pleased to get this feedback on my last paper in my Interpersonal Communication class. Woo hoo! ;~)
I think this is what the gen. ed classes are all about, getting us students familiar with writing and learning our own style.